Hey i worked on the text a bit and think it turned out a little better, I still think i could improve on the text but will get better over time, comment on how the background looks thx!!
looks ok to me a little to monotone actually way to monotone try to get a different medium flowing throughout and i dont really see a focal point because it is so monotonous good attempt always try to improve each time and dont give up because you dont like the outcome. there are some good points to your subject such as the flow of your lightening.. good job overall
