Girl With Hair

Ahhh those marks over the left side of her face really ruin this one for me lol

 

Besides the cheese title, it's pretty good. Nice composition and flow, but I think you should tighten up the text a little.

 

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Totally agreed.
Took the words right out o' meh mouth. -_-

That aside, I'd also tight up the colors. They see just a
lil' odd.

Nice work

 

Work on making your bg more interesting, it looks ok but too repetitious. Also get rid of the text

Good quality on focal, gj on that.

 

the sig looks pretty nice .. just the "seductive presence " i dont like

 

Haha thanks for the comments guys
Changed the title

 

i think she's very cool and...
does any1 knows how you make a stroke ???

 

The text is too out there. It's big and its too far from the render. The lines on the bottom right are hideous as well.

 

Background looks sick!
The text is nice, maybe lil plain.
But, overall very nice job. keep up the good work : )

 

looks good overall

 

Yeah i <3 it, just the text and the, little smudge on the face, is it? Yeah well, that's gotta go

 

Lol thanks guys.
I think I agree with what everyone said

Better text, and clean up here face


But in respond to Xiou. lol. Those lines came with the stock Didn't even notice them until you said that hehe

 

i think the biggest prob is that it lacks depth. she looks like she's just behind a textured wall. keep up mate.

 

I actually like the grunge-type look. A few gradients to fix the color wouldn't be bad.

 

I like the colors...