This thread is done, we've all had our say. So, let's all just go our seperate ways. He knows which player he will buy and where he will go to do so so let's all just say bye. >.>
Well, the first Stanza of your poem was fine, but the second one uses an irregular rhyme pattern ABB CDC Perhaps if you change it so it says He knows what he wants, And he knows why, So lets all just say bye. That way you keep the rhyme pattern ABB CDD
