<span style="font-family:Comic Sans MS">It's really nice. I love the depth and the color. The only thing I don't really like is the light by her face.</span>
The light source is off in the top left hand corner. There is shadow on top of the render's shoulder, so the lighting should be from a more horizontal angle, possibly even from the bottom left hand corner. Other than that, I think the red accent color should be more involved in the rest of the tag.
Take the darkness outta of the right side, lighten the person up a lil. Where'd you get them C4D's? they are amazing overall its a nice tag.
thanks dude, just noticed that I'll get around 2 fixing that.... anyway, thanks for the comments and critiques.