Ok, I worked long and hard on this one. ^_^ I used a city stock that had too bright lighting. -_- But I grimaced and grunted and I think it came out beautifully. What's your oppinion? v2 Look better? CnC plz! :wub:
Im half half about it bro. You nailed the text imo,hardest thing on a tag to do. love majority of the forground, i think the gun could do with a bit of a lighten just to make it fit a bit more ( i would newlayer > applyimage >(optional sharpen being a anime sig ) sharpen. lightly erase away around the gun then newlayer > white overlay using a soft round brush, brush over the gun and erase parts you dont like. But thats just to see how it looks, might turn out bad? or make it pop. Because atm, if you look at the balance of the tone in this, his face and arm are reasonably light ( his face is obviously the focus point , but the gun is far darker, maybe even just use the dodge tool lightly? GL I still like it alot. "Awesome depth, composition, and perspective. Text is good too. I really like this one. " Tru that.
please.. PLEASE remove that wireframe do it for me could use some more effects .. but depth and text are very good i'd give it a 6,7594/10
one again, what they said. xD One thing I don't like though, is the wireframe. just kinda looks out of place imo.
Bah, looks like I'm not the only one who doesn't like the wireframe. The lighting in places feels a tad funky or misplaced in a couple spots like his shoulder. I almost wanna say change part of the text to the red accent color of his gun scope. Not sure though. Good beans broski We gotta start our collab if SOMEONE ever gets on msn...
Work on the lighting. The light sources are too bright and over contrasted which makes it look fake and forced. I would personally take out the wireframe as well. The bg is kinda bland and repetitive and the focal is slightly too large (I dunno, maybe its just because I started using smaller focals xD) Nice depth, composition is killer, and I like the fx by his shoulder alot. I think it could still use some more fx though. Text is good but I think it could be placed better, I just don't know where (truth be told, I suck at text so you shouldn't really look at my advice on it ) All in all, lovely tag but I would try some of the suggestions said here and above to make it pwn more ass
Thankyou all. ^_^ And yes... I will remove that wireframe. lol I guess I was just dying to use one and I threw it in. lol The lighting does bother the poop out of me, almost intolerably. -_- I love that stock but I tried my hardest to tone some of it down, didn't work. -_- But I think it came out ok either way. Btw- Dunan is a chick. :lol:
