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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Hoplite_A2, Dec 5, 2007.

  1. Hoplite_A2

    Hoplite_A2 Well-Known Member

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    It's WWEEEEEEEEKEND!!! ... No, not really... But that's what I was
    listening to when I made this tag. ^_^

    Stock photo I souped up then smudged and added a bunch of different types of effects. :D
    I really like the outcome, lately I've been making myself very happy with my improvement. ^_^

    What do you think guys?

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    CnC plz :wub:
     
  2. kovan

    kovan Senior Member

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    hoplite, your smudging is good but try to bring the opacity a bit up to make the smudging a bit rougher
    like this it seems like low quality cause you smudged like that

    but the tag itself is pretty good :) text is good but i don't like the bright places so much

    i'd give it a 7/10
    keep it up ^_^
     
  3. DraveN

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    Looks good m8 nice work,only thing i would say is there is a lot of negative space above the focal points heads which kinda make the sig look emptier than what it is,overall nice work well done.
     
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    What kovan said, and the overexposure effects could do more to help the flow, tag looks good overall.
     
  5. `RGB

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    it looks awsome
    i love the swirls around him

    the only thing is he looks a bit low down
    but i feel thats probably because of the stock itself

    this is a very good sig hoplite :)
     
  6. LostUchiha

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    I like the over exposure effects. The smudging, like kovan said, could be better. Text is good. You seem to be getting much better in text :P The focal could also be moved up more.
     
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    what they said. xD

    not my favorite from you, but you are definately improving. =)
     
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    nice i like the pen tool thingy but the backforun colour isnt the best well not for me it isnt,I think the bright white spots dont look right maybe darken those areas.
     
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    Smudge with harder, stronger brushes and settings along with softer brushes and settings to create depth. Some of the effects look a tad over sharpened. Someone else said this, but the canvas size is throwing off the composition and making the the focal lose some of it's pizaz, or look "weaksauce" :)

    Good stuff broski.
     
  10. Hoplite_A2

    Hoplite_A2 Well-Known Member

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    Thanks all. ^_^
    I really appreciate all your CnC guys!
    It's really helping me get better! :D
     

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