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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Kennedy, Dec 4, 2007.

  1. Kennedy

    Kennedy Senior Member

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    And yes, the lighting is messed up, that's because I didn't really care about it at the time I inserted my render. I just wanted to finish the wip.</span></div>
     
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    Cheap_Indian Well-Known Member

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    Nice fx but I would like to see more to the bg though.
     
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    I like the hand on the pillar. I've seen the render, if I recall it correctly, so nice use. I don't like how the head feels a bit choppy against the background, and also the lack of effects in the black half. Good sig though.
     
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    Well I tried a different kind of compo on this one so I left the effects out on the right
    Also I got the bg just the way I wanted it but I can see why someone would not like it like I do(it's weird how the sudden black comes in(That's what I predict atleast)).

    Thanks for the feed guys, appreciate it :)
     
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    Is that supposed to be a reflection on the right (or left if you look at bottom tag)?

    I'm liking the effects near the bottom of the render. Up on the hood near the back of his head there's blue light. Not sure what it's coming from. It might have been intentional... Just thought I'd point it out.
     
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    agreed entirely ^.-
     
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    its nice but it still looks a little un-finished imo
     
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    maybe a shockwave around the blade ? >=) looks good tho just undone
     
  9. Kennedy

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    As said lol it's not undone, it's how I wanted it to be but yeah I added a new version with a bit more the bg for all you who wanted more bg.

    No, it's supposed to be a pillar, that's why I erased the hand out of it.

    As for the lighting...
    Edit: Actually I fixed it now, should be much better
     
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    nice i like it, the elil efects look really good.lil bit big but still loks cool.
     
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    nice job. The sig looks like its split up from the middle, cuz the render is going straight down from top to bottom right at the center. Maybe add some text on the right side, to balance the sig a bit more.
     
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    Thanks and yeah, I had that in mind and wasn't sure of it.
     
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    some good effects, but still a little empty imo.
     
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    That's it, text version is up, no more editing, if people still think its too empty then well... can't please everyone, when I please myself I don't please other ppl xD

    And thanks for the comment :P
     
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    without text is better. Nice job Kennedy :) Personally I like v1 . Feels more natural to me.
     

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