i think you covered the render with farrr to many effects, distorting it. i think that part of the render should be left alone a little bit otherwise it looks kinda messy :/ the effect is pretty kool overall, kinda flat though (not much depth) lastly i think the text shouldnt have the nuke symbol next to it, doesnt really fit imo :/
its kinda hard to make out the render, if anyone doesnt know wat assassin's creed is. too many effects over it i think. and the render kinda looks blurred or low resolution. i kinda like it though