Fiction To Reality

Ok, still trying to get into the groove of things...so yea...meh



Version Two

 

I likes. Only problems are the render is wayy too dark (Yes, I know it was black...) and the left side of it is oversharpened/choppy/whatever.

 

Yea the left side is suppose to be like that....fiction to reality....comic book somewhat to smoother real life type setting.

 

That black spot on the top right is random.

I think it looks a little too boring, especially the bg and fx. Don't really like the text. Nice flow and compo though.

 

Yea I am working on a second version, getting it a tad more how I want it. Trying to really add some more depth in there.

 

Ok I added a second version!

 

Version 2 looks better because of the amped effects but the updated text in version 2 isn't as good as the first versions text. I like the Black and white setting. I don't really feel a certain flow in this sig but it has a style I like. Good job.

By the way, is the possible that you could show me where I could acquire that render? If possible. pm me with it. Thanks.

 

Its a stock not a render...if u want I can send you the link for it though.

 

If you could send it, please do. I want to use it big time. Thanks.

 

Nice work Kalli, I really like the concept effects look pretty nice too..

 

Thanks and I will PM you the link m8.

 

i really dont know what the other dont like because its boring or stuff like that but i like it a lot! nice job, especially the second version!!!

*thumbs up*

 

Thanxies!

 

second version is much better but I still dislike the text.

 

Is there maybe a different way to show the transition? Just checked in on this, and it seems overoversharpened now. Don't have to listen to me though if you like it.