Was the mesh over the face part of the render? I think it would look better without it, if possible. Also, the sig would look nicer if the render was blended more into the left half of the sig, since it feels like render/background right now.
The wireframes and c4ds on the render add to the concept you were trying to show. I think they look great. Love the depth and effects in the background. Only problems I have is the text placement and that one random bright read dot. Other than that, great use of c4ds and stocks. Good beans broski.
thanks guys. i tried to blend left side in but the depth got ruined imo, so i deleted all my smudging i made to blend it. also i may add later version without text
I'm likin' that depth and c4d blendage. Love the lighting too. Text is great, colors are tight. ... That's a freakin' tight tag. Nice use of a stock for bg. ^_^ Great colors. Did you throw that wireframe on his face? Looks beautiful mate. ^_^
Could make the moon larger and more luminous. Or just use a different stock and incorporate it's light source.