only 2 suggestions for this one, your text appears to say the "Funisher" with it being cracked, i'd keep it off that effect and it looks like your lighting is on the left, but the render is lit from above. put a light up there, try not to make it too powerful though. i dont think you have to change the left side for it to work ^^
am i blind or what???? :lol: :huh: well i see alight up there?! daecu suggested putting a light up his head and thats what i made? should i make it more powerful? hmmmm :huh: