i feel like the render ir so big and smooth that the bg with all the small and detailed lines rly just doesnt fit :/ both look good on their own personally but im not rly feeling this one as a whole ^.^;;;
Hmm... not bad. I'm not feelin' that text though. And it's got the "floating head syndrome" just a bit. But the rest of the composition looks pretty tight. Good flow. As there is no light source, the light in the sig just seems to be coming from nowhere. :huh: I like the coloring you did on the render though. Keep it up.
