Assassins Creed

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by H u s t L a, Nov 29, 2007.

  1. H u s t L a

    H u s t L a Active Member

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    PSD available. If you want it let me know. C&C thanks.
     
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    oversharpened on his left, colors are distorting over there as a result :/ right side looks nice though~
     
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    I had a feeling people would think that part looks weird. It's actually not due to oversharpening though. The distorted coloring is from the film grain layer that I used. It was suppose to help in the dissipation effect, but I might need to work on that a little more. Thanks for the input. =)
     
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    left side esp. on the bottom of the render is too sharp and messy. Did a good job with that render, I have yet to see a decent sig with it.
     
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    That's an easy fix mate. ;)
    Just blur it a tad. ^_^

    Looks good.
    Lighting's just a tad strong, but well placed.
    Effects are pretty nice as well. ;)

    Maybe could use some more burning for depth though.
    Still, good job. ;)
     
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    A friend of mine also mentioned the burning for depth thing. I gave it a shot in a few sigs and I can't really seem to get it down yet. It's a little difficult for me to pinpoint the spots that need it. I'll make a few more sigs within the week trying that technique and hopefully you guys could continue with the great input. =)
     
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    ahh, yeah.
    That was hard for me to learn too.

    Here's some tips -

    • Burn shadows for depth and get used to that first.
    • Burn on a "strength" of about 5-8 and work small amounts.
    • Don't overburn
    • Burn away from your lightsource, it almost never works to burn you lightsource. lol
    • After burning a bit, back off and look at the piece as a whole to see where it needs to go next

    Hope that helps,
    Keep up the good work. ;)
     
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    too sharpened....its looking like granite.
     
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    I don't like it, Background could atleast match the render you know...
     

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