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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by inverse, Nov 29, 2007.

  1. inverse

    inverse Banned from GR

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    <div align="center">Here's something I just made. Lacking a little inspiration, but I think that the outcome is polished enough.

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    Beautiful effects on his hand.
    Lighting could be better imo, like maybe put some behind him too.
    Hmm... Hard render to figure out lighting for.

    Nice perspective and great use and choice of a stock.
    Looks like 47's about to give somebody a coupe de grace. ;)

    Pretty cool
    Simple, effective, smooth. ;)

    Classic... Ahhhhh. lol

    Nice work mate.
     
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    inverse Banned from GR

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    thanks man. +rep for being such a nice guy ;)
     
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    You did a really nice job on this, like he said this looked like a hard render to give lighting to. the placement is nice and it fits perfectly with the background. the only thing i dont like as much as the rest of the signature is the part at the bottom of the render, the brushing isnt smooth, and this piece is mostly smooth and it doesnt seem to fit in as much in my eyes. but thats just me probably. i think you did a great job with this piece, good work on it! :)
     
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    I don't like how all (or mostly, I don't know) the effects applied are only focusing on the focal. Doesn't seem right IMO.

    I still like how smooth it looks though. That text is killer. ;)
     
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    Yeah, I usually tend to keep the effects focussed around the focal, as the reality style I favour means I can't alter the background in any un-subtle ways.

    Thanks for the C&C, guys.
     
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    Nice sig did you make the buildings in the BG.
     
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    Very nice apart from the fx on his waste..really doesnt fit.
     
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    Looks nice but I have some suggestions:

    The building on the left, you should make the transition blue/violet colors to orange better. Right now it seems too sudden.

    I think the dark blotch on the bottom left is unappealing and doesn't really help the perspective much

    The top left most part of the tag should be darker (as you go from the focal to the top left corner is should be getting darker and darker and at the topmost part at the left, it should be darker then the rest) This would help with the perspective of the building.

    Nice tag though. Looks very clean.
     
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    A2 pretty much says it all.

    sweet effecks on the hand, real soft but eye grabbing.
     
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    i dont really like image directly infront of the guy, but everything else is dope.
     
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    I like the feel and sort of ambient lighting on this one. To me it seems like the effects might give off some light as well so the lighting on the render feels a little off. Other than that the render's shoulders seem a bit sharp. I like the stock in the bg.

    It's definately more difficult to get into or make tags while lacking inspiration. So along with that I think it's a nice tag.

    Good beans broski.

    Off topic: Cool movie but at the same time a bad movie.
     
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    I like this one, it's very clean looking. I'm not too fond of the blotch at the bottom of the render, but everything else is really nice.
     

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