Incredible flow. Love that. The overexposures are tight too. Overall it's very nice. Only advice I'd give is this, Try to make the focul "pop" a little more with some more blurring. It all looks like it's on the same level. Maybe blur the stock a bit more and some of the c4ds close to his head. If you blur really close to the render, the focul will go "POP".
That new focul looks really good. You hit the spot. ^_^ I love this tag. It's cool to see that you can nail other styles too. Nice work.
thats awesome my only qualm would be the text, it still looks good, though I don't feel it compliments the tag. By the way, whos the guy in it?