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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by ~ Art ;, Nov 27, 2007.

  1. Nov 27, 2007 at 8:28 PM #1
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  2. Nov 27, 2007 at 9:09 PM #2
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    im here xD

    I would sharpen the effects around the focal a bit, maybe erase a few of the effects on the render too. Not bad, nice simplicity. =)
     
  3. Nov 27, 2007 at 9:20 PM #3
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    Haha, thanks for the comment.
    We're even now ;)

    And yeah now that I look at it, I agree. Not too much of a focal :P
     
  4. Nov 27, 2007 at 9:28 PM #4
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    hint: next time: new layer, apply images and sharpen the focal as bomb said and blur beside the focal at some strategic places.
    Gettin' better Jordan :)
    Nice work!
     
  5. Nov 27, 2007 at 9:29 PM #5
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    Capitalize the font on the text, and make it smaller, but increase letter spacing.
     
  6. Nov 27, 2007 at 10:54 PM #6
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    pretty nice effects, overall a bit blurry, not bad.
     

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