I like the idea with the stroke lines. I suggest some tutorials mate, i know its not easy but its the best and quickest way to get some top techniques.... rather then point out the faults thats what i suggest.
Well, I agree, The style is pretty. I like it. But the problem I see is the light source. It's behind her head, but there's light on her face. :blink: My advice is to make sure your light source matches your render. The effects look cool though mate.
thx for ur comments and if there is some tuts u could recommend on getting better on this..it would be great if u tell me where 2 get 'em
I would suggest doing an aray of them rather then one. The broader the styles and techniques the stronger your knowledge base will be and soon enough you will be producing your own style of well put together pieces, not to mention its always good to brush up.