Lots of detail which is good but the amount of lighting brings it down. Focal doesnt gett the attention needed due to the lighting. Few adjustments then a quailty sig.
not ba d but i think its a lil messy and u cant really read the text..te lighiting is wrong coz it dont do whts meant to be doing. try to bring the guy more in to focus maybe blur the backgorun inorder 2 do this.
Its an improvemt although it seems one image, add a blur to the background to make your focal stand out. Sharpen has worked just work round the focal. Text needs a change of position. Personally i dont think it needs text due to the amount of detail in the sig, maybe a small pixel font. Keep us posted.