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Just playing around with a hott model, some focal point work, and trying to work on my depth and coloring.
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not feeling this one too much, yet im nto oen of those idiots who only criticises. the depth, ya id say u nailed it. the lines ( screen effect possibly?) seem to throw it off to me. as well the light in top left is really, really bright.

but from experiment point of view i would say v2. i can see alot of people liking this, im just not feeling it

 

thanks for the help. i appreciate it.

 

The scratches or whatever all those lines are have gotta go. Other than that. Nice.

 

Very bright, not really feeling the flow.

 

Way to bright, fx need work.

 

Too bright, no flow, no depth, poor colouring, effects are random and in wrong locations and most of all, terrible composition. I'd recommend you try some tutorials. Also, borders on soft light always look like sh!t.

 

I like the second one, who is the model?

 

thanks for the c&c though from everyone else appreciate it! hey inverse, go screw yourself. and i really wasnt doing much with this signature except for goofing around. and the border is on OVERLAY! ha.