Its Been Too Long

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by domkantthink, Nov 23, 2007.

  1. Nov 23, 2007 at 4:34 AM #1
    domkantthink

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    pleeassee C&c
     
  2. Nov 23, 2007 at 5:07 AM #2
    [T] Torrent

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    pretty cool V1, Text is alright too, just a little large imo. gj,
     
  3. Nov 23, 2007 at 6:03 AM #3
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    tats nice man, but that one single line is kinda distracting
     
  4. Nov 23, 2007 at 9:52 AM #4
    FriendlyGuy

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    that line in the upper right takes ur attention ffrom the focal
     
  5. Nov 23, 2007 at 10:35 AM #5
    WaRCrY SaBoTaG3

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    yea the lines take away from the focal
     
  6. Nov 23, 2007 at 11:12 AM #6
    Anesthetik

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    yeah i would add in the line takes a little bit away from the focal, but everyones already said it. also the text isnt exactly my favorite thing about this.
     
  7. Nov 23, 2007 at 12:15 PM #7
    Vendetta357

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    White 1px border would help on the black one, maybe crop it up to the bottom of the diamond on his chest?
     
  8. Nov 23, 2007 at 1:04 PM #8
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    Don't like the clippin mask or text, dont like pixel effect either.
     
  9. Nov 23, 2007 at 2:24 PM #9
    domkantthink

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    alright so the consensus says to take out the clipping mask and erase the line in the upper right. ill get right on that :) any more comments?
     
  10. Nov 23, 2007 at 2:32 PM #10
    domkantthink

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    there are the edits, i took out the text for now :)
     
  11. Nov 23, 2007 at 2:45 PM #11
    Vendetta357

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    Border improves the v2 on the black/white one, but maybe lower the opacity a little bit? Seems too bright. Either that or go for a slightly greyish one.
     
  12. Nov 23, 2007 at 3:29 PM #12
    Samurai-JM

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    hawt. the big line on v1 could probably be justified if you used the text more with it, and maybe blend that text a bit less xD I had to squint lol. Very nice though 9/10
     
  13. Nov 23, 2007 at 3:41 PM #13
    Purgeandfire

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    v2 is much better. Just a tad busy, but nice focal and sig.
     
  14. Nov 23, 2007 at 5:40 PM #14
    domkantthink

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    well thank you guys very much :)
     

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