Shahrukh|khan|srk|tag|

i got bored so i made it


the lines are from zohair SRK Tag Tutorial

rest is mine

 

imo its far too bright, i can hardly see the people bring them out more (lower the light) and itll look better ^^

dont let the line on the right cover the guys face like it is, little distracting

 

ill wait for more suggestions =)

 

waaay too bright mate, the lines are nice, but that one in the middle kinda kills it, and umm..no, im not a sharukhan fan :tongue:

 

Hmm, it is very bright but the style is pretty cool
GJ

 

Way too bright and if there is a focal, I cant find it.

 

The lighting is way too intense, the line going down the middle is kinda distracting to me, and I can see that you tried to put a wireframe in there, but maybe you shouldn't have tried to just lower the opacity of it.

 

thanks guys ill remove the light,wireframe,the line in the middle

ill add a c4d

 

Yeah, like the others said, there is no focal point and the line in the middle is a problem, as well as the lighting.

The lines look cool but bring out the people mate! You want to make them the focus, not the lines

 

thanks