Hey there, So i made this one today, i still need help with alot of things such as c4d renders and how to make them look nice in a tag. I attempted to follow a few tutorials and they were helpful but didnt elaborate on certain quite enough for me. here it is:
u need work on your lighting, brighten the focus and have a source, i like the effects goign on, good depth too ^^ if your having trouble on the lights try a tutorial tht looks like it has good lighting, and read though it, but just try the lighting-related parts on your current tag theree ^^
I knew that was a problem, Where would be a good source though? Whenever i added lighting to this piece it always came out looking badly. thanks in advance.