Fight Club*

I think you need to bring out the focal a little bit more and it will look awesome.

 

ok thanks

 

It's an nice sig, only I had to look for a couple of second before I could see what he was doing

 

Same as above. Bring out the focal a bit more and make it a bit more obvious on what's going on. I was a bit confuzzled <--confused.

 

The light from the source and cigarette are too strong. Dodge some effects in the bg to give it some depth. The text placement also seems a bit off imo. Other than that I think it's a good photomanip.

 

way too much light on his face it really makes for a bad looking image ont he sig.. tryy ficxing that...

 

Yes Indeed, face is too bright.

Good job though.