Maybe a little blurry. :\ Also, the effects look kind of random to me. Like there's no plan just slapped on. idk, maybe it's just me. Still, It looks ok. Not bad. ^_^
I like it. Sharpen it and it will look loads better. Also, fix on some colors so they even out with the others.
i dont reall like it coz i think its coz its a bit messy...u should try creaste sum flow and like where u put the orange lights it seems wrong maybbe add that as lighting would look better.