S P R I T E

v.1 (full size original)


v.2 (cropped down because of cnc, newly added)


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too much negative space imo nice smudging
work on depth lighting and blending well.. for this one anyway

 

yeh, i had way to much canvas to play with
i dont like resizing the canvas once ive started making the tag

 

Not too bad, but ya try to fill the open space. The smudging looks to be you type of style though, so its up to you. Looks pretty good though

 

yeh, totally
its my fault the open space
spite tags shouldnt have a canvas that big, unless the sprite is bigger than a usual sprite

 

i like your current
nice depth and lighting.. i take it you where going for the same thing?

 

ye, i wanted to join a crew, and many of them suggested to do some more in the style of my current
ill try get one better than my current with time

 

good luck dude, im sure you will do it use a few c4ds and filters (with editing) to try create better effects and depth

 

ye, will do thanks.


anymore comments?

 

Try cropping it a little.
Great effects tho, just too much (if you get what I mean).

 

yep totally



V.2 added because of cnc
opinions?

 

v2 is neat bro.

 

thanks

come on need some more cnc!

 

not bad bu still looks strange coz of the tiny sprite, and the smudging looks kinda messy.

 

the whole concept of a sprite is the fact thats its tiny?

thanks for the cnc anyway
the smudging is a bit messy in this one ill admit