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i took suggestions from my last signature and i tried a halo 3 one, tell me what you guys think please?

please constructive comments, go into detail about what you think needs work.



TEXT EDITED VERSION:


BLACK AND WHITE VERSION



thanks,
Anesthetik

 

Colours are really random and the text is a bit out of place.

Other than that, it's pretty good.

 

thanks. i mean the colors were supposed to be kinda random, i think it added to it a little? or not. ill try adding a color overlay or something to it to make the colors more similar. and the text i was trying to go for heading in the direction of his helmet and along the background image. but i mean eh i duno. thanks for the help!

 

Can we see a B/W version? That could be pretty tight I think.

And the text, this is my view:

Stroke is often not the best idea.
Overlay normally isn't a good idea either.

You want to just make it blend in a bit by putting it underneath some other effects or just out in the open, whichever seem aesthetically correct.

 

i edited the origional post and it contains both what i tried to edit with text and the black and white version.