the splatter is cool but it could use a little more depth, maybe some brushes or smudging, its a great start though. one thing i want to tell you, if you think it looks wierd, your not going to be happy with it, make it to a point where you enjoy it yourself ^^
I agree about the depth. work on focal aswel.. the focal is good anyway. but don't sharpen the sides.. The tag is ok. it just misses some efx
the sig is okay dont like the top one coz of the colours its a bit strong.However the bottom one does look much better