idk it seemed like it was worth a try. i just used his method of making the render pop out, and his text method, which is really cool. all teh other stuff was all me. its not fantastic, i just need some C&C so i can make it better
few things to suggest: make the part they stick out on transparent, its showing up white on the forums >.<. next i'd say dont make them stick out sooo much, have the guy on the right be the main focus by having him stick out and the other guy not possibly. try a photofilter to give them some red or lower the saturation on the bg to match them a little bit. and last for the text, i think it looks better just how u type it, without the red glow on the outside.