Young Kakashi

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by YoSim01, Nov 13, 2007.

  1. YoSim01

    YoSim01 Active Member

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    better than my current sig?

    edit:
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    edit2:
    v3
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    v4
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  2. `RGB

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    way better mate, keep it up
     
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    thanks ;)
     
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    Anyone? no tips?
     
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    I think its not bad, but too plain for me and i cant really read the text, plus i think if you change the color of the border the background will stand out better.
     
  6. YoSim01

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    I was thinking the same thing, but I can't come up with ideas to make it less plain (A)
    Though most people I asked disagree, I really like this render, and I like the idea of making a tranquil and calm signature, but im unable to do that without making it look plain.
    Ill think about the border
     
  7. Hoplite_A2

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    Yup,
    The focul's a little odd too, cause
    it's all got that motion blur effect and
    it kind of leaves your eyes wandering.

    But the render placement's not bad. ;)

    Keep up them tuts. :D
     
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    Loads better,
    everythings great - just i think the lighting is a bit too strong.
     
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    its much better then ur 1st one looks real good.
     
  10. Ferdi_09

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    I believe you did a great job on thel lighting :). I also really like what you did with the render itself. Altho' you could make the focal a little more visible. (If there is one already lol.)

    Nice. ;)
     
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    It is too flat and text is not so great either
     
  12. YoSim01

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    Update. improvement?
     
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    v3....
     
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    v1 is cool.
     
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    not bad maybe u need to sharpen the dude coz there no flow or create sum closer to it...dont look to bad so just work on that.
     

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