Wip | Spiderman Sig

Here it is:
v1

v2

CnC appreciated. This is still work in progress. Need suggestions to keep going.

 

Colors are ugly and i think i've seen you do better

 

yeh the colors need some work, background could use something, i dont know what, but great flow so far and i love what ever you did to make spidey shoot web! keep going

 

That was intentional. I wanted to give it a dirty look. I guess I'll give up on this one. Wont turn out that well. Going to try a different style.

That was a C4D on his hand. I'll remove some of the layers and repost.

 

You need better lightning but I do like the fade of color

 

v2 added. Tell me what you think.

 

The add of more color shows more of the background and the background doesn't really go with the action of the render.

 

Ok, any more?