its abstract, the second one is definetly better the dark spot on the left is annoying other than that its great
Looks like you started out with a sprite... And the focal needs to be better like MadRidz said. Text is hawt.
Hmmm... I don't like it. -_- Sorry. The focul looks odd to me. It's confusing. And the bg is overblurred a bit. Text is great, but the rest of the tag looks like some odd splatter. lol Let's see some more.