hmm, i think i like this better than the hitman tag. though it'd probably be more fitting if she was looking across the tag instead of at nothing. Also, there's just something about the tag and the stock, i think it just needs some brightening up. Try going over with some whites, adding some nice looking areas to your tag instead of having the same brightness across the whole tag. And i think the reason i like this tag more than the hitman one is because this tags stock is alot better quality. just a few more tough ups to this tag and it should improve the overall quality
Not bad. I think the focul is weird because she's way off to the right. lol Btu the effects aren't bad. You're getting better.