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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Asyd, Nov 14, 2007.

  1. Asyd

    Asyd Well-Known Member

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    Still trying new things, critique would be helpful. <3
     
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    Effects are straight on. ;)
    The stock looks really LQ though. Not good.
    Maybe a bit too dark on the left side as well.
    Make sure you don't get carried away when
    doing contrast. ;) :)

    Overall, it's not bad. But I think it's his sword and
    the effects on it that make it appealing. ;)

    Keep it up :D
     
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    Yeah I usually get carried away and make everything bright and draw attention away from the focal, so I'm trying to cut back :P Love your comments hoplite, you've given me good critique afew times that has helped me improve.
     
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    Another from the same stocks, won't bother with a new topic.
     
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    Hmm....
    All those stocks look really LQ to me. :(
    I like the effects, but I'd erase some of that
    C4d from his hair. Fade it a little sooner than it
    is now and it'd look a lot better. ;)

    Nice blurring, but maybe un-blur a few of the parts just
    a little that are nearer to the focul. ;)

    Not bad. :D

    Thanks for the compliment Asyd, I appreciate.
     
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    I was trying to perceive motion, the part under him there is his sword, kinda like a moment frozen in the eye of the storm, but thanks for your advice, I'll take this into mind when I make my next tag.
     
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    No!
    I was talking about the second one. lol
    The motion effect you pulled off. That looks tight
    on the first one. ;) lol
    I was just saying in the second one the c4d looks
    odd cause it's all up in his hair.
     

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