Fractals (I think that's what I'm seeing) are misplaced and a little overpowering and sharp.Text is rather excessive, but otherwise I think it's quite well done.
besides the fact that it has whore written in giant letters (takes away from the tiny person) it doesn't look bad at all.
Just not feeling this one <3 Lose the text and the fractal-ish stuff and try it in color. I love the c4d use as well as the composition, also feel it'd be a nice piece in color.
Not bad. Texts not doing you any favours. Think theres a little too much going on in the bg. Prefer your currents.