Vincent Valentine //

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  1. JL Beowolf

    JL Beowolf Well-Known Member

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    Heres my entry for the sotw, and i was wondering if u gusy could give comments on it. Havent made a sig in a while but heres a go.

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    Not feeling it, focal really needs work and the whole mid to left is too random, just messy, try to clean it up

    Also vector hardly goes well with vector (the hair[?] looks like a vector effect)
     
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    posted updated version
     
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    I like the red smudging coming off of him, it has really good depth. Maybe the render placement was too far to the right, or the canvas to large, because it feels unbalanced.
     
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    Well bonus points for an interesting idea and concept, and for the sake of all that is important, love this piece because it's your own. :) I've never really seen anything like this and I for one really enjoy it. Great work!
     
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    holy crap
    that is amazing, well done
     
  7. JL Beowolf

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    thx for the comments guys really appreciate it
     
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    also can u tell me which version is better and why, THANK YOU!!
     
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    v2's cool ^^ Pretty cool I'D say.
     
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    v1 imo. Much better depth. The effects are more "out there".
     
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    V1, but i would suggest moving the text, or tighten it up so that the secondary text does not fade off into the light source halfway through.

    one of your most unique works so far, and just overall sexy. Great work and gl in the SOTW, u have some good competition.
     
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    ya i gotta try hard for this sotw. Thx for the comments guys
     

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