~=final Battle=~

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by CarrieMarie30, Nov 12, 2007.

  1. CarrieMarie30

    CarrieMarie30 Well-Known Member

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    Well I'm working on this still, but some of the smudging has turned out great, and the chaos which to me, looked like a battle raging on has worked well. I would love some feedback though, as I really love this signature and want to improve it greatly!

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    Pretty please some CnC? Before this hits page 2!
     
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    Pretty hot but it could use some more depth. Try adding some gradient maps.
     
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    Looks like you tried for depth when you blured the right, but it just makes it look a lil messy when you do that.
     
  5. CarrieMarie30

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    Thanks for the wonderful advice guys, I'm on a version 2 now, in fact I'll share with you what I've got on it so far! I found some great stocks to compliment my smudging and I settled the blurring down.

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    v.2 is awesome i love it great job hun
     
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    Why thank you X'ed! Coming from you, I get all googily feeling in my tummy! :) I'm still working on it though so if you wanna throw any pointers, I'll listen attentively :)
     
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    maybe increase some contrast? in the bg
     
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    I agree. Contrast would make the depth and color really come out. Right now it seems a little monotone and lacking in eye-catchiness. Maybe burn some parts in the back too to bring out the depth would be nice. :)
     
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    Ok with the grandoise advice of X'ed and Darth, I have brought out a version 3, and I hope it's a final. I love it. A little more epic than anything I've ever tried.

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    Wowza V3 is very good. Keep up the good work!
     
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    Find a way to allow her to fall into the background. Like blend her into it, but subtly. My suggestion would be to add a lil sumtin that goes with the background on a side of her. Like an aspect from the background that fits the theme.
     
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    V3 is definately the best. The text still needs work. But I like the color choice, and the blending on V3. Very nice job. Too tired to criticize too much tonight though......heh. ;)
     

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