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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Dusk`, Nov 11, 2007.

  1. Dusk`

    Dusk` Senior Member

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    REALLY HAPPY WITH THIS ONE! Yay.

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    Newer, higher quality version:

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    Can't blame you, it's a neat signature. The right side of it is pure sexy! Though the left side doesn't flow real well with it. Maybe smudge it a bit more to give it like a cloud feel or something? The lighting is great, the composition is super, and it's perfect in black and white. Like I said, the only thing I think that takes away from it is that left side. Great work though!
     
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    Thanks.

    High quality tag added.
     
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    its different, i liked how you tried to make him as if he was looking over his shoulder, but it still kinda looks to me that hes trying to look at something further away.
     
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    Rights side looks nice, there is a bit too much attention on the left side. Left side also looks a bit weird :\
     
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    The left side throws it off a little imo..
     
  7. sephiroth666

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    Yeah, the left side is also a completely different style as well. Doesn't look good at all there D:
     
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    maybe smudge the left side just a little bit more...

    and whered you find that pic? ive been looking for some good ben gibbard stock for a while but i cant find anything...
     
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    .agreed

    smudging of the left side is really weird
    cool tag though
     
  10. Dusk`

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    Again, I had no idea what do to with the left. D:<
     
  11. Hoplite_A2

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    oooo :eek:
    Looks great bro.
    Lovin' that lighting. ^_^
    Great smudgin', great depth.
    Great everything. ^_^

    Awesome tag. :D
     
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    the smudging is great but fix up the left hand side it destroys the flow. U used 2 different ways of smudging, and the left side looks hurried and incomplete.
     

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