Well thanks for the feedback guys, with your advice I worked on a version 2, and took the smudging down a ton and worked on balancing the colors out a bit more! V1 V2
No real focul? The focul is the girls face. :blink: V2 is very nice indeed. Love the lighting, it's very pronounced. Good work
Thanks gentlemen, and Fawks my goal was to make her face the focal point, I thought I had done a decent job of that, if not, I'll keep plugging away on it! Thank you Hoppy, I like it a bunch, and I normally don't really get too excited about my own work, but this one made me happy
I think the focal is EXCELLENT on v2. really pretty. are you a girl as well? i thought i was the only one...
^^^^^ Hehe, I know how that is. I usually get frustrated. But my last tag made me very happy. The best advice I ever got from here was something along the lines of this. "Make tags for yourself. If you like it, that's all that matters. Just keep trying to improve yourself. And if you have fun on a tag that's all that matters. Don't listen to crap CnC like 'oh that sucks' or 'no focul.' and that's it. Just enjoy your tags and try to take good CnC and make your tags better " Bonzai told me something like that. Plus, I think it's a very nice tag. ^_^ The focul is clear. So don't worry about it. I think it's fine the way it is. ^_^ Nice work.
Well Darth, I am, and you'd be surprised how many ladies post here, some of us are a little more incognito about it. I used to only use male names on message boards, because the second you use a girl name, suddenly every little kid that can't get a date starts pming you about his profound love he just found for you. This board thankfully, is full of artists and people more focused on their art and learning, rather than bothering the girls
