Eternity

C & C please!

v1

v2

 

It's cluttered, but seems to work in an odd type of way. You might be trying to combine too many styles at once.

 

I thought the outcome was nice but cluttered too. I didn't really use that many techniques in this one, but I know I can make it better, I just don't know where to start if you know what I mean.

I need to get back into this more over TG break.

Thanks for the comments!

 

I definitely like the first better. Cluttered, but it works! :] Nice job.

 

Thanks! I've been trying to get back in this again.
I guess I'm getting better.
I'll keep working on keeping it simpler.

any more comments?

 

its kinda messy and randomized, good focal though.

 

like the 1st one better

 

one last bump

 

My thoughts exactly.