B&W helped a lot. The effects are just overdone a tad. It robs the focul when the whole tag is one certain type of look and feel. Try to bring a few different looks into each tag. Instead of just using a bunch of displaces, try utilizing the flow of your render to do some C4d work. Or adjust your displaces to (with a different brush pattern or something.) to follow the flow of the render as well. Still, good job. Looks pretty good. ^_^