//kirby//

C& C please. I'm still getting back into graphic design, so any critiques are welcome, just not too rude, hehe.

v1
v2

 

bump

 

lol, pink. Liek the sig, nice, look, flow, and depth. Very apealing to the eye and great focal point. Even the text is good too. Great Job.

 

The text placement interferes with the focal and it's flow cuts against the flow of the sig.

 

Thanks Torrent!
I'll work on the text, Carpe.

Anything else?

 

Hmmm...
Looks a little too blurry to meh.
But the compo's not bad.

I would say that some of the effects throw off the
flow as well.

But it's not bad mate. Text could use some workage,
But it's not bad. Placement mainly. The comp of the text
is great.

Keep it up

 

v2 added.
is that a better place?