Bioshock

rate/comment plz

 

the render is quite hard to make out :/
i like the background, it looks good
the text needs a little work too aswell, other than that overall, the tag is ok

 

I couldn't really tell what the render was lol. You have good flow and the text is pretty decent. Keep up the good work

 

Yep, cant figure out the render. Text could be bigger. Good sig overall though.

 

I'll rate it 8 out of 10 could be better if you add some good effects

 

thx guys, and here, this is the render i used: http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/2961/bi...ckrenderlv5.png so you can understand what it is...