A Moment Suspended In Time

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v2



Meh. I made this one for a tourney.

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not bad, lil more depth in extreme bg would improve impact of his leap and that box with typo fits but needs more dimension and depth to it, not bad tho good luck..

 

Thanks. I'll try those things.

 

I believe this title is also one to an Underoath song? If so, good beans. I really like your style here.

Is it an LP or a sig?

 

looks cool but i think it needs a little bit of more color

 

Well, the man paying with his life, crumpled up the background, angry bald man don't like it when you crinkle his background all up, so death is for sure. Poor weird hat guy, he never had a chance.

 

If it had better depth and lighting I think it would look sick.

 

^^^^
Agreed. A little depth
would go a long way for
this piece.

Good work still. ^_^
I like it.

 

Do you have the original stock? I would like to compare the two. I think depth and more affects near the bottom would help a lot.

 

Added v2.

Is it better?