Kraken

With Text


Without



Here´s the link for the render in case you want it
http://planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-24017

 

the one without text is better
the one with text now looks not so good bcoz the text placing is not quite rite
if can try to find a new spot to put ur text n plus the effect of the text
other than that good job xD

 

v2 is better

really nice tag. Great colors and blendage.

 

It looks like you blurred the left and set it to lighten, don't do that.
Text is bad.
Kind of monotone.
Sig is okay. Difficult to tell what the render is.

 

The focal could use a bit of a sharpen to bring it out more. Otherwise good job.