bad focl point, bad depth, not feelin it bro, smudging is decent tho, the lighting is off and the type is misplaced.
I don't like nor the text nor the depth of it, but it can be great if you spend more time working it. And manahan, stop beeing a prick.. You can express your opinion but you should be more constructive and give the guy a break, you are far from perfect too.
beeing a prick? that is contructive critisism, sometimes you gotta be a little mean. it pushes them harder, and i just stated the obvious, it does have a bad focal point, and bad depth, being a prick is far fro that, being a prick is saying that im better, or he sucks, noi think hes good, i just said that his tag had flaws. so suck it up.