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  1. Kennedy

    Kennedy Senior Member

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    1st pwns, 2nd focals are lost :D but still nice
     
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    Thanks

    I'm thinking of extending the mask on the 2nd, so it would blend in more and it would give the focal some boost
     
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    yo man that first tag is amazing!! :-O
    i've never seen something like that, mad chill dude. good job :D

    the second one is pretty good too not a big fan of the the line pattern but it works :) good job one both
     
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    1st one is just amazing, 2nd has no focal. but still decent, i really like th usage of c4ds on the first. GJ
     
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    1st rox

    just that stright line near focals hair
     
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    didnt not dig the 2nd one.. the lines ruined it..
    but the first one was very good, lowed the flow and the c4d usage..
    gw
     
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    tidus one is hot
    2nd, i couldn't find the focal for a moment
    sweet effects though
     
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    im not feeling the flow on the 1st one, i think the c4d on the right throws it off completely and you should consider making it a background effect rather than foreground.
    the scan lines on the 2nd one make it look... a lot more generic than it should.
    Aside from these few things the both of them are pretty nice :)
     
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    Nice job on the first one, has really good atmosphere. That square effect obstructs the flow though. Also you might want to change to colors of the bottom-most text, it stands out a little too much. Also, not sure about that effect on the bottom right. Still, that tag is pure awesome :)

    On the second one I congratulate you on your ability to use unwhored styles. Might want to erase on focal and erase with lower opac around focal to blend more and might add some depth. Also, that blurred object in the center of the tag (sorta greenish) looks out of place.

    Overall nice job Kennedy.
     
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    the 1st one is really nice, the 2nd one seems a little bit off(too many scanlines maybe) but i like what you did.
     
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    Hell yeah!! Im freakin lovin 1 and 2 is okay, but hard to see the GRAW 2 render.
     
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    [ED] Aose Well-Known Member

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    Very original style, love it. Not really feeling the second one, but the first one and your current are amazing.
     
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    love the tidus one although and it's just my opinion that the c4d should blend slightly more with tidus' back that would give it a sick effect

    as for the other one. I like it, love the colors, love the feel the flow and all but there seems to be a focal confusion around the face with the scan line maybe lighten them up a little bit around the face but still make them visible but that should bring out a little emphasis to his face
     
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    i agree, and the hard line light on his head should be removed..nice job on v.1 not feelin the 2nd one tho..
     

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