Smuding Ftw

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by rivo3622, Nov 5, 2007.

  1. Nov 5, 2007 at 3:31 AM #1
    rivo3622

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  2. Nov 5, 2007 at 3:34 AM #2
    Hoplite_A2

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    Hmmm....
    Not bad. :)
    But I don't like where the
    render is in the tag. Looks
    odd. There's a lot of empty space there.

    The smudging is pretty good though. :D

    Still looks like a work in progress though.
    Might want to do more with lighting and try to
    get some depth in there.

    Good job ;)
     
  3. Nov 5, 2007 at 3:39 AM #3
    rivo3622

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    thx a lot ^_^ probably the best critique i have received in ages :P
     
  4. Nov 5, 2007 at 3:42 AM #4
    Hoplite_A2

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    heh,
    Welcome to Game Renders. ;)
     
  5. Nov 5, 2007 at 12:05 PM #5
    rivo3622

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    lol i have been a member for a long time actually, i just was away for a while
     
  6. Nov 5, 2007 at 12:37 PM #6
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    not bad could use some colors.. tho...
     
  7. Nov 5, 2007 at 12:41 PM #7
    killer-rapz

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    a bit empty but its ok
     
  8. Nov 5, 2007 at 7:59 PM #8
    diverseartist

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    needs more detail to make a better focal point
    looks kinda flat imo
     
  9. Nov 5, 2007 at 8:41 PM #9
    EFX

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    Needs some darkness and contrast.
     
  10. Nov 5, 2007 at 8:49 PM #10
    McLovin

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    needs depth
    really flat
     
  11. Nov 6, 2007 at 7:48 AM #11
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    yep i like what the others have said.. keep pluggin
     

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