I like it. The only things that are bothering me here is the odd horizantal stroke over her face and the border.
Yep, only thing I can see wrong is indeed that stroke over the face. Other than that its damn hot stuff.
put a colour balance over that with a bluish feel to it think it will be real nice only thing off is colors imo 8.6/10
If you just lightly blurred the hard edge of the line on her face with a small soft round brush it'd fix it right up.