Yay, New Sig! :d

Just a new style that I learned from Cliche's tut "Thoughts and Dreams." Awesome tut and great style, hopefully I can do a lot better on the second try!

CnC Much Appreciated and Advanced Critique welcome. Slam it if you have to! I would love to be able to fix and learn from mistakes and progress as an artist.

 

in overall is good, but some lines disturb flow and lighting on her face is weird

 

^^^^
x10

The tag looks great except for a
few things, mainly face and a few
of the lines.

Keep it up,

 

Yeah. I messed up the lighting on the face and I think its a bit sharp (her face). I see what you mean by the lines. I will fix it in a little bit! Thanks, any more comments?

 

theres no depth i think i knw wht ur trying to do and wht tut u floowed but keep the lady normal colour and not black and white and create some flow it looks messy.gppd try

 

Thanks. Going to be working on it when I get out of class tonight.

 

yea, really need better depth :/

 

There we go. I worked on it a bit. Didn't have a lot of time because I have to go back to class rofl. But lemme know if that's any better. Thanks in advance!

 

Loads better mate

 

Thanks!

 

bg is emtpy
and color dont match at all