The Reaping // Added V2 !

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  1. Xioushi

    Xioushi Well-Known Member

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    I just saw the reaping a few hours ago on DVD and I loved it. Original movie, very well done for a mediocre budget, here's my tag for the Halloween SOTW:

    V1 :

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    V2 :

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    What do ya think?

    EDIT // With inverse's help I made a v2, what is your call?
     
  2. SyNiKaL v2

    SyNiKaL v2 Senior Member

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    I like the affects. I think the left side is a little empty tho. Other than that I like it. :)
     
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    Fix the blending, colour and text. Also, the negative space throws off the composition.
     
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    Bump for versione numereux duex?
     
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    Oh I love it. Good job.
     
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    Thanks. :)
     
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    Much better
     
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    Thanks, I really appreciate your strong criticism.

    :)
     
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    a little repetative in some spots
    sharpen it imo


    looks nice overall though
     
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    v2 is amazing...... :eek:
     
  11. Xioushi

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    Thanks, I really see the difference between version 1 and 2 myself. I really like how the CnC from inverse really sparked my senses.

    Diverse I don't know what you mean, how is it repetitive, when those are the effects, they are supposed to look like leaves with bugs and a very grungy look.

    If you have seen the Reaping you'd agree. :P :P

    Thanks though. :D
     
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    #2 ftw! Great fix on that man for real. Glad Inverse could help you out on that! :D
     
  13. Xioushi

    Xioushi Well-Known Member

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    Thanks. lately I've been feeling like it's missing something, or maybe the left side is too light, but when I darken it, it takes away from the girl as the focus..

    hmm.. :/
     
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    v2 is prosauce :) but COULD use SLIGHTLY darker colors IMO.. ;P
     
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    What do you mean? Is the sky too white? Or is the green too bright of an olive color?
     

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