The Reaping // Added V2 !

I just saw the reaping a few hours ago on DVD and I loved it. Original movie, very well done for a mediocre budget, here's my tag for the Halloween SOTW:

V1 :




V2 :





What do ya think?

EDIT // With inverse's help I made a v2, what is your call?

 

I like the affects. I think the left side is a little empty tho. Other than that I like it.

 

Fix the blending, colour and text. Also, the negative space throws off the composition.

 

Bump for versione numereux duex?

 

Oh I love it. Good job.

 

Thanks.

 

Much better

 

Thanks, I really appreciate your strong criticism.

 

a little repetative in some spots
sharpen it imo


looks nice overall though

 

v2 is amazing......

 

Thanks, I really see the difference between version 1 and 2 myself. I really like how the CnC from inverse really sparked my senses.

Diverse I don't know what you mean, how is it repetitive, when those are the effects, they are supposed to look like leaves with bugs and a very grungy look.

If you have seen the Reaping you'd agree.

Thanks though.

 

#2 ftw! Great fix on that man for real. Glad Inverse could help you out on that!

 

Thanks. lately I've been feeling like it's missing something, or maybe the left side is too light, but when I darken it, it takes away from the girl as the focus..

hmm.. :/

 

v2 is prosauce but COULD use SLIGHTLY darker colors IMO.. ;P

 

What do you mean? Is the sky too white? Or is the green too bright of an olive color?